>>intended, matter, excitement, wallop, bull
I intended to ignore you
but my truth didn't matter
because you had other ideas
of what excitement could be
Like the wallop of a cartoon mallet
I was struck by your everything
And now, like a bull from its pen
I have one thing on my mind.
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Left By: calree
I agree with cain. "I was struck by your everything" is a great line. the whole poem is very nice and succinct. great work!
Left By: cain
I really love this piece - I like the smooth way it reads. I think it's about two people who are in love. My favorite line is "I was struck by your everything". Thanks for sharing :)