>>intended, matter, excitement, wallop, bull
I intended to ignore youbut my truth didn't matterbecause you had other ideas of what excitement could beLike the wallop of a cartoon malletI was struck by your everythingAnd now, like a bull from its penI have one thing on my mind.
I agree with cain. "I was struck by your everything" is a great line. the whole poem is very nice and succinct. great work!
I really love this piece - I like the smooth way it reads. I think it's about two people who are in love. My favorite line is "I was struck by your everything". Thanks for sharing :)